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How To Make Your Sales Copy Looks Exciting And Hot ?

Written by copydude on March 29th, 2009

Dear Reader,

Before I continued, I would like to apologize for the late posting, as I was having my fun and happiness in Thailand for the last 5 days.

I hardly get’s an internet connection, since I was in a small town in Bangkok call “Ramkhambang,” where my beautiful and sexy girlfriend live in.

Hey, before I go deep into what I wanted to tell you in today’s post, let me just tell you a bit about the great night life in Thailand.

What ?

You say you did not come to my blog to read about the night life in Thailand?

Okay, let me tell you, while you read about the night life in Thailand, you gonna learn how to make your sales copy looks exciting and hot, trust me you won’t regret.

You ready?

I bet you do!

Listen, since my girlfriend is a coyote dancer, she knows quite a lot of night life, life style in Bangkok.

She once took me to a pub call “Bam Buzz” located at Bangkok “Nana,” where beautiful ladies were all naked walking around and dancing around in the middle of the pub.

Anyway, my girlfriend had friends working there so I was able to get a sit in the pub and look at them dance.

Those ladies were very young, they were about youngest 17 years of age to oldest 28 years of age.

They were beautiful, sexy and I can’t hardly stop my heart pumping the sexuality blood into my already extremely hard little hobbit.

You see, every hour the dance table (A very large table) will usually change the group of ladies.

And after midnight around 12 there was a show, where lesbians were lick and make love in the middle of the dance table for everyone to see.

They’d really kiss, lick and even dig each other, believe it or not, that’s my first time seeing that, I can’t find that anywhere in Singapore.

Just imagine, the young and beautiful ladies sitting beside you seducing you around?

OMG !

Since my girlfriend was with me, I was hardly able to play around as you know.

I wanted to take some pictures of the pub but I can’t, since camera are prohibited.

Anyway, I think I’m going to secretly go there with my friend again… haha… hopefully my beautiful and sexy girlfriend doesn’t know, or she will burst me up like a crazy cat!

Now, rock and metal music in Bangkok was a very famous trends.

There is a great pub, I believe to this day the very best pub I had gone to, which is call “The Memory Pub.”

I got to tell you the band that play rock music of a famous Thai band call “Body Slam” was extremely great.

The music was heavy, their crowd were all participating into the heart of the rock music.

Seriously, I can’t find such a great pub in Singapore, moreover, I can’t find a band like them in Singapore too.

Okay after reading a short version of the night life in Thailand, what element did you notice?

I bet your mind is now thinking, “hey I’m going to Thailand for my next holiday, it sure looks interesting and fun”

You see, what I had written is to make your mind…

Fantasies !

And fantasies, is almost what everyone that walks the face of the earth had when they were dreaming.

You see, there are good and bad about using fantasies.

Let me tell you about the good part first.

The good part is whenever you try to write your fantasies, you write in a way, that’s somewhat possible to be achieve.

What I mean is, what you write must be able to be true enough to happen in real life.

Do you still remember that last posting I wrote?

I bet you do, here’s the sales-pitch that I wanted you to find another important element in writing sales copy, here you go,

It sure would be worth it if you’re single and after taking Dynabolics, you start to attract beautiful women, twice as hot as your previous lovers. Could you imagine the new sex-life that is waiting for you?

It sure would be worth it if you were ever in a violent confrontation with one or more men. When your safety is on the line, your brute strength is all you have to survive. If you were H-U-G-E, do you really think it’s going to be easy for men to kick sand in your face? I don’t think so!

It sure would be worth it if you were a businessman- especially if you have to negotiate high-stakes deals. Trust me- you’ll always dominate the deal… leaving the conference room with everything you want. Those pencil-neck geeks would be too scared to tell you “no”… They’ll think you’d hit them over the head with one of your cannons!

You see, every sentence is a possible fantasies claims.

Now, to the bad part of fantasies.

The bad part is that, some people just write it too outrageous and impossible or hardly to believe.

For example, there are sales-pitch like,

“How to Make Millions In Just 30 days Online ?”

or

“I was broke and left a few penny in my hands, but now I found the secret that make me millions of dollar. I’m now living in a big house, with 10 Ferrari, a indoor swimming pool and a big back yard garden.

Want to get my secret, just pay… blah… blah… blah…”

From the above example you had just read, it seems the fantasies is just unable to believe.

Listen, even top marketers sometime, uses this type of outrageous fantasies, so be on your guard, it may seem to be unbelievable, but they will use claims and promises to out charge your believability.

So, whenever you write your sales copy, if you wanted to use fantasies to make your copy exciting and hot, use fantasies that is able to be true enough to happen in real life, or is able to make your prospect to believe in.

Hey, you remember the last posting, I said, if anyone find out the element in the sales-pitch, I will send them a free audio recording of “Gary Halbert’s Killer Advertising Seminar.”

You do.

Okay, unfortunately, no one gets it correct and hardly anyone participated, so there is no winners after all.

Stay Frosty,

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